Rogschard, Lords and Loyalty

Can you add 1000 different types of features? (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

Can you explain on password?

I am feeling kinda ambivalent towards this game. The prose is often very verbose, other times bland. It reads more like fanfiction, which is fine for what it is. Yet sometimes it does shine, especially in more emotional or silly moments.

The game mechanics are the worst about this game, there is a lot of repetitive combat with meaningless enemies and the sex fights too just become boring after having encountered the enemy already 10 times. Luckily you can skip those. The fights against special enemies are always gimmick fights and so it seems like the rpg mechanics were more so an afterthought, existing now disconnected as a separate - and for the lack of smut - worse game. 

The base building mechanic feels similarly; it gets you no rewards until the very end game and mostly just feels like a drag; the timed raids for resources and long walks through your own dungeon to upgrade buildings deliberately stealing your time. 

As for the characters, the girls often seem uninteresting to me because they fall too much into the harem follower category. The boys at least seem to be competitive and confronting the player much more on their own. Passivity is fine for some characters, but since quests already are deliberately engaged by the player, I think the characters should at least be allowed to push the player a bit more around. 

I like what the catboy wizard did at the very beginning, standing in the way of the player and telling them how they will have them, while the player still isn't acquainted with the mechanics and so very well might lose to him and for the same reason encountering him the three times was pretty fun. 

All in all I really like what this game is trying to do, but maybe making it more narrative focused would have been the better choice. I already liked how many scripted encounters it had, but the game mechanics feel like unnecessary filler that strips away the joy I had from those.

Skeleton: *Exist*
Me with a Flash heal doing 40 damage: LIVE

Game ks very confusing specially when y go out i played it on website like where buttn are well stll game is interesting

How do i play the game i dont know how to down load it or find on browser

noticed a couple bugs:

Apartment raid is requiring Orcmin dungeon completion; apartment completion is not a factor atm.

Library construction has hidden requirement of completing Fishladle’s Shinies quest completion

looked at the features, you had me at fully customizable

Lol mekill's shield isn't immune to lust dmg. didn't realize the intended way to beat him till after. I just used inspect on him and realized he still had a weakness

Hi is this game completed story wise

So. The biggest problem. With this game? Is that the species pick. Seeks too inconsequential. You have a great character creator, but it feels like it means nothing because your character almost always acts the same with a few differences in abilities. There's not enough abilities and flavor text to make the species feel unique. You don't feel like your playing a different species. It feels like a human with a flavor text. A few ideas to make it feel more impactful? Have it impact certain story beats or reactions from the character or how your character reacts. For example: the lab. If your character is a slime. Have them get angry at being made to kill a slime. Have them get a little miffed at nook's comment about uncivilization. Or the slime girl you fight in the sewers. When she splits up? Have your character look at themselves like. Can I do that? ((Based on my own reaction to that scene)) when you do the whole slime nest thing. Have your character Have an easier time building up respect for the slimes since your a greater slime. And for gameplay? Make it FEEL like your playing a GREATER slime when you come up against other slimes. Make your character have a naturally higher dodge change and a chance for physical attacks to miss.  A big missed opportunity is a chance to have real shape-shifting practice with Mona, not just horny stuff, since your character as a slime can also shape-shift. 

Now that I've given general tips. Although I could probably give more, here's an idea for gameplay: Add way more species specific abilities. But specifically? 

Have finding and fighting a stronger species that's of your same race have an impact on your character. As not only can they learn something. Give them a chance to seek out one of those characters to learn an ability from them. Like leaving a turret of slime, or a slime trap, or making a small slime warrior to go out and fight for you, with lesser stats but it comes back to you after death and gives you back All it's exp earned and items. Allow your character to do what the other slimes you fight can do. And as for what you can learn from your mentor? A form change. Where each thing is slightly different. But toggalable. 

I mostly have one for slime, but I also have a slight idea of what to do for the wolf species. For slime? Lean into what a slime can do. Make it to where the character absorbs alot of material and begins to shape shift around. Using there body to mimic and attack. Sort of like Mona. When they have a weapon equipped, they absorb it, and morph it out of there body. The flavor text detailing how the character morphs there body to attack. If either completely nude, or atleast having the parts being held exposed, this form prevents grappling.  Each attack uses flux, but your flux increases when you use it. To make it fair. Also, this is just a general gameplay idea, not a form tip, make shape-shifting be able to happen on the fly for interactions if you have the appropriate shift skill. Perhaps add other things. Like wings or claws. Allow for alot more creative expression in how the slime species goes about it's work. Do the same for all species of course. But basically make them passive abilities. I think the new game your working on is a great chance to expand on this idea more than you could in a text based game, but I still think there's potential here. I'm rooting for you. 

A second critique? The story of the game feels too short, with a lack of player choice in how they respond to certain things. Let us choose how we handle the whole, betrayal thing. Or maybe give us the chance to choose our characters likes and Dislikes. Maybe once a certain skill is past a certain level, you could do things like. Actually hit the drain fly. Ya know? 

Also I can't find toe eater after recruiting her but that might just be a me problem or it might just not be implemented. 

I like this

So I played through the game and I have to say I enjoyedit quite alot. I tried to complete all the content I could find. Which brings me to my biggest "problem" with the game.  I am quite sad there isnt more game (more story, more enemies to fight, more areas , more customization, more remarks about your character and their quirks, etc.). As for more specific things and possible bugs  I found:
1. After I used an oblivion draft I then was no longer able to summon treespirits and the skillbook also didnt drop anymore in the previous spot

2. I did not manage to make two partners pregnant at the same time.

3. There are some typos across the game especially when refering to your or another character ( As an example minor things like "your" instead of "my")

4. I kinda expected to have to defend the dungeon in some kind of siege battle against attackers after I had to build the slime-spawn-buildings at the beginning. Maybe that is still planned for postgame though especially with the hinted evolvement of the police and such in game.

TLDR: Completed & Enjoyed the game, wished there was more content and found minor bugs.