I have really enjoyed what I read so far~ excited to see where this will go! I am quite surprised on how detailed this world is and how much lore there is already. Great work on the intro as it really hooked me!
In the encounter with Nooks there's an option with an Exhibitionist perk, does that actually exist? And if so how is it obtained? Also I really like the game! I've played it for about two hours now and I'm looking around for secrets, if there are any.
Depends on what you are asking about. I expect the levelling system to be fully completed within a month or so, but making the actual skills and the encounters that use them will be an ongoing process
Mostly good though starting with what I find bad (though minor) first: When selecting a red highlight to continue, if the new text is longer than your browser window I have to scroll up to read the top part. It can also be annoying to navigate areas, (unless I'm missing keybinds) due to how "go east" etc is laid out.
(Bug/Spoilers) There's also a bug where when you accept the Kobold egg the scene restarts.
All that aside, this is still the best (though currently short) story based smut game I seen since CoC. Dialogue is amazing, fun and witty. More than just lewds. Readability is perfectly easy on my eyes. I really appreciate the race/character arts a lot as well. The 2 encounters felt creative rather than "press x do damage" and while I will probably assume some kind of basic RPG elements may exist, encounters like these are really great. The overall layout and clicking text to advance is still something I love despite complaining about how it makes movement slower.
Just keep doing what you're doing, it's high quality.
A nice start to be sure :3 I'm excited to see how this continues on! If you want help proofreading stuff, I'd be down to help sometimes, though I guess that'd spoil some things... Seems rude to keep a list of typos and then to just dump them all on you as reports though
That isn't rude at all, quite the opposite, it is really helpful! There is lots of text and I haven't had time to proofread most of it to a quality that I am happy with. Feel free to drop any typos you find in the comments. Posting the original sentence is enough for me to figure out what to correct
Here's the first batch. I really do like your writing style and humor :) I put [] around my proposed word/punctuation changes (except in the sentence that included [Trash-no-sweep], there I used <>), hopefully that's helpful, lmk if it isn't
I mean, the last time you caused any kind [of] serious accident was a decade ago
They [are] curious oddities, relics of a past that can never be returned to.
A girl, stark naked, hangs suspended between the fuse box'[s] wiring
(I am also just confused by what this means, I don't understand how big a Drainfly is. From this sentence, it sounds like she's *in* the fusebox, among the wires, but everything else makes it sound like Drainflies are the size of smallish humans... but some how still live in walls? I guess there is a wide range of sizes among humans, so how small is small? Like, there *are* 3 ft tall adult people, who might be able to squeeze in wall spaces, but not in a fuse box)
You feel the heat in your [veins] spike
Classes represent a person[']s skill in a field of arcane or martial study.
[Starter], Journeyman, Advanced, and[,] in rare cases[,] others.
When you hang with friends, [they] are your friends from work.
who[,] after following your [insistent] gaze[,] has started sticking out her chest,
and know all 'inspect' has t[au]ght you
You [throw] yourself at the Drainfly in an attempt to grab her.
Her dexterous [limbs] probe your body,
Against the wall of your utility closet lies [Trash-no-sweep] the barely <functioning> broom
the bolts holding the [brush] in place instantly come apart
being snapped in half, [accompanied] by a barrage of vindictive chittering.
You can see a thin trail of feminine excitement start to drizzle from between her [plump] legs.
Before you know it, your hands wander up her elegant legs, coming to rest on the sides her [plump] waist.
greedily grasping herself[ ]two handfuls of your chest. (delete the 'a' there)
The air grows even thicker with musk, your bodies [grow] hotter,
but still a far cry [from] the extravagant mix of life you would find at the market square.
However, business is nothing if not [stubborn] and stuck in its ways
In basic [terms], it was found that by super-sizing the chips
a sin so great that reality itself cannot [bear] the sight of it.
Elven males [started] largely forgoing relationships with their female counterparts
Instead, [Elven] males now spend their days
their inability to get [laid] on a secret conspiracy
[Born] from the fruits of the great [tree]. (?)
[if only] for the fact she is barely wearing anything else. (you have "weren't it" which I'm guessing was supposed to be "if it weren't", but I think "if only" fits slightly better?)
causing the city blocks to [grow]
are fights between guilds for territory, often over a [district]
However, most districts have far [too few] monsters
This makes Whitehat guilds[ ]highly [dependent] on the size of their territory, or the presence of Grayhat and [Blackhat] guilds
Their dungeons [are] well loved targets of Whitehat
Dungeons are labyrinthine constructions [built] around a dungeon core, often [run] by a Blackhat guild[ and] used
Ok! Here's the rest that I caught in the prologue and Codex so far! Also, I assure you I didn't notice all of these in my original playthrough, this time I was reading very slowly for typos/grammar. I think I saved and tried all the branches for everything so hopefully caught aaaalllll the things. Sorry it's right before an update
capital is the only thing [worshipped] (apparently 1 p is also considered correct in American English, but it's less common than two p's)
[There] isn't much you have to hide, you are late,
'I see showing up for work [on time] is considered optional now, (there were two "now"s in the sentence, could be "I see showing up for work now is considered optional," or I suppose even "I see showing up for work is now considered optional" or if you wanted to maximize the nows to cover all the possible places it could be in the sentence "Now I now see showing up for work now is now considered optional now" XD lol)
After sniffing his nose, the sunken eyes ("sniffing his nose" is a bit weird, right? maybe "After giving a sniff"?)
[It's] a faxcee, an 'almost' computer,
It is like a laptop, if you squint [reeeeally] hard, (this shows up both in the in-story intro to faxcees and in the Codex entry)
There is way [too] many of them, they are arrogant,
tells you to 'show her the ropes', and sets out to [find] somebody to take this burden [off] of his hands. (this is also a bit weird, why is he setting out to find some one, he just dumped her on you, yeah? So maybe: "...tells you to 'show her the ropes', happy to find somebody...")
Nooks puts hard work in making sure people to think he is incompetent (I think should be "Nooks puts hard work into making sure people think he is incompetent" or maybe "Nooks puts hard work in making people to think he is incompetent")
nobody ever wondered what she [was] doing here
Within days, your fellow [colleagues] started greeting
Before you know it, she has pulled a first aid kit [from] somewhere,
one of [these] days you are going to end up dead
'Now [will you] take [off] your shirt[? Those] cuts need to be cleaned and bound.' (or else rework the next line to omit the reference to a rhetorical question, but I think I like Mona seeming like she's asking)
'Sure, I will take [off] my shirt.'
Mona['s] cute cheeks turn maroon,
Reaching for the [fifth]-
For a couple of [exciting] moments
her hot breath prickles your neck, and then [it's] over.
dependent on personal preference [than] gender roles.
Sex and romance are considered completely [unrelated] topics in Weredog society (? I'm not familiar with a definition of "untreated" that makes sense in that place, but it seems like the kind of word that might have a less common definition/usage that I don't know)
a monthly increase in sex drive brought on [by] pheromones
during the heat/[rut,] their instincts become so intensified
from getting fired more [than] once.
conduct your business [than] the middle of [the] cubicle block.
I have been standing here for [quite a few] minutes, (or "a couple of", you wound up with a mix of the two phrases XD)
[']She is right Nooks, we have been fooling around for far too long. Mekill will lynch us if he finds us dillydallying like this. It is time I get to work, and both of you too.['] (not formatted as speech, even though I believe it is meant to be the PC speaking)
waving you a warm goodbye, [despite], or perhaps due to her seat being
You can hear his fluffy tail slam against the back of your chair, as it wags excitedly from left to right. (how is his tail hitting the chair when he's up against the PC's back? I assumed I was sitting back in the chair with the front of his pelvis up against my [and thus the chair's] back, especially with Mona's comment about "a horny dog humping an office chair", so maybe his tail would be hitting the PC's desk or cubicle wall?)
Ask [Mona] for her opinion about the guilds.
somewhat fondly on the guild[ ]for bringing a feeling of resistance to a ever corporatizing world[ ]and (lol, usually I think you need more commas, I'm a comma fiend, but I hold back when it's all clear enough. I think this is the first case in your writing where I think they're confusing/uneeded)
the hair on the back of your neck [stands] up, (or "the hairs... stand")
A thing seems to click and clack [behind] you,
You can almost sense the horrid mass[ ]slither and pulse (omit the "it" or change to "as it slithers and pulses")
Mona [whispers], as she takes your hands.
(Mona, why are you telling me I'm not special??? ;-; I'm very cool. I'm going to become a Journeyman in a combat class someday, just you wait! Lol)
Join me, my Noodle, let us [elope] to (or "flee to", since elope tends to have a marriage connotation, but I feel like that also fits with Nooks' joke suggestion, interlope means like, intrude. I named my character Noodle for some reason, ignore that...)
Nooks['] tail starts to wag as [he] [repositions] himself
and inside a blackhat guild there is more to do [than] hunting monsters
spies to be caught, and [egos] to be stroked.
I think [it's] fairies again, and I really need a extra pair of hands.' He asks, giving quite a different reply [than] you were expecting.
that [none] who lived only before the Replication would have likened to a printer.
[It's] worse [than] normal this month,
But I like to be a rampaging sex demon on my own [terms],
And besides,[ I] have work to do, and forms fill,
Lets give them one hell [of] a whooping this time,
Then, you throw [off] your suit, and go completely nude.
From the printer's [bowels] erupts a roaring hiss, follow by a [bolt] of lighting.
[Nooks] grunts, as a squirt of sticky precum pulses from the tip.
More [than] happy to oblige,
'You don't do this often, [do] you, cutie?' (or "'You [do] this often, don't you, cutie?')
With his dick firmly [plugging] up your hole
but his [excited] puppy eyes melt your heart into submission
Suddenly, your peaceful break is interrupted by a [loud] voice.
Feeling [too] important to do your jobs, ey?
perhaps due to the fact they ran into none of[ your] ugly mugs
so it might be in our best interest to all show up with a massive hangover.' Nooks [suggests]
After you sit down[ ]next to her (or "After you [take a] seat next to her")
brought into existence by the dragons, to [serve] their every whim.
more successful species [than] their own creators, and became far more numerous [than] there were dragons in need of service.
common sight in most of the world, even where [there] are no dragons
a small number of kobolds [are] born (pretty sure... all this editing is making all words and grammar look fake @___@, but I'm so close to caught up!)
and an endless array of incompatible nuts and [bolts],
Then she stands up, and makes [a] bow so deep
making her big tail slam excitedly into a nearby [shelf],
her large fluffy abdomen makes you [instinctively] want to hug it.
from the silkmoth, the Bombix [mori]. (feels pendantic, but I taught biology for a bit and for my students' sakes can't not mention it, lol, in Latin/taxonomic names, the genus gets capitalized, but the species does not)
but their wing muscles are [too] weak to for upward flight.
Common size, four arms, sizable white or gray wings, (... the picture of Dayji only has two arms, right?)
into a force able to go [head to head] with Greater Amsterdam's ruling powers. (I think it's "head to head" or "toe to toe", right?)
Fishladle appears to be walking a [bit] stiffly,
I will have that [stiffness] out of your shoulders
Fishladle [continues] to sit still, her whole body seeming to grow shamefully warm.
You feel her [bowels] contract once more,
You drink cheap [wine] and cheaper spirits. Fishladle keeps dutifully [topping] off
(XD I fucking love [Trash-no-sweep])
Species:
Humans, [Elves], Orcs, (I know both are right, but usually I think most works pick one and stick with it and you use Elves rather than Elfs most of the time, so if you wanted to be internally consistent then the Codex directory should be edited)
Before you stands a display, containing a replica of the Hougeton, the [grimoire]
(lol, currently with the end of the prologue dumping you out on the street after claiming the Hougeton, but not progressing anything in Dayji's, you can go back in and sit down to feast again and wind up with multiple Hougetons)
So many typos, so much shame. Gracias, oh delightful human, I have made the corrections. I was aware of the grimoire thing, you have to be able to restart the scene once I make the update in order to make the next step in the event trigger. Just consider the multiple Hougetons a badge of honour
Wow i really like this game so far! Honestly can't wait to see the way it goes if everything goes as planned!
Only problem i actually found are a good bit of typos so far beside that it seems good so far! Can't wait to check out the next update keep up the good work!!
The game won't load for me, I get the Rogshard title card, but no start buttons or anything else. I also couldn't spot a load indicator, so the game seems to be stuck for me. I'm using the latest Firefox build
Right, it seems to be because it's attempting to access the browser storage, and isn't allowed to by the browser. (There appears to be some max size limit imposed by your installation of Firefox, perhaps due to incognito mode) There is some code in the game that should protect against this, but it appears it isn't working in a 100% of the cases. Thank you for reporting! I will put it on the list with things that need to be fixed (for now, using another browser or going out of incognito mode should work)
No worries, there is a chance that you're not the only one this happens too, just the only one bothering to report this. That text does seem awfully transparent, it really isn't supposed to look like that. I will do some testing around seeing if I can find something. Does it look like that on other browsers for you too?
Incredibly charming! Rare case of erotica that actually has a fun game behind it. The writing is tidy, and is very reminiscent of webcomics I read growing up, especially that broom. Can't wait to see where this game goes, I love it so far, and the art's also great.
Noooo, it ends so fast ! Well that's to be expected, but that introduction made me quite into it and eager for more. (love the broom as both a silly thing that can serve as running gag and apparently fate's tool too. Don't know why but it gave me some Discworld feel).
I don't really feel like exploring how much content there is in the world outside of the story for now, but will follow for sure the updates this is getting.
Also, for the only thing I can report for now : the loading was imperfect if done during the printer fight. Not sure why but some actions that would make the fight advance would not get undone by loading one turn back unlike the loss of my health, and unlike any loading during the first battle that went really fine (unless I haven't noticed). I'm not sure what is different nor if it is reproducible or just a one-time occurence.
Oh, I think I had that happen too. I saved at the beginning of the fight, and then did [insight], and then I loaded it to see what happened if I did the other things before [insight], but it proceeded as if I had already done [insight] (with the info you get from it in the battle header text that precedes the decisions each time), I'm not sure if it was a load error, or if doing the other things kind of make it assume [insight] was already done?
btw there are some attribut-based choices in the game that require higher attributes than the mc has by default. i assume you can't increase your attributes yet? at least i didn't find a way before hitting the end of the current build
Yes, in the prologue it is impossible to succeed them. They are there to teach the player what the stats are for. The game will open up after this, and the skill checks will actually matter
I am glad you liked it! Feel free to drop any typos in comments if you come across them. Or you can wait for further updates, I will catch them the next time I read through the segments
The last sentence has one "rather" too much. Those are the typos that i can recall at the top of my head. there have been a few more but don't remember where exactly they were.
I encountered a bug where if i was defeated by drainfly on the first day and then went to work the second die and tried to fix the printer i am attacked by a drain fly and am teleported back home, even though i was at work.
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I have really enjoyed what I read so far~ excited to see where this will go! I am quite surprised on how detailed this world is and how much lore there is already. Great work on the intro as it really hooked me!
In the encounter with Nooks there's an option with an Exhibitionist perk, does that actually exist? And if so how is it obtained? Also I really like the game! I've played it for about two hours now and I'm looking around for secrets, if there are any.
You can't alter the player character's perks and stats in the prologue, but you will be able to get it in the game later (once that part is made)
(I just realized I forgot to ask) But when might that part be made? If you have a general area of time.
Depends on what you are asking about. I expect the levelling system to be fully completed within a month or so, but making the actual skills and the encounters that use them will be an ongoing process
Mostly good though starting with what I find bad (though minor) first: When selecting a red highlight to continue, if the new text is longer than your browser window I have to scroll up to read the top part. It can also be annoying to navigate areas, (unless I'm missing keybinds) due to how "go east" etc is laid out.
(Bug/Spoilers) There's also a bug where when you accept the Kobold egg the scene restarts.
All that aside, this is still the best (though currently short) story based smut game I seen since CoC. Dialogue is amazing, fun and witty. More than just lewds. Readability is perfectly easy on my eyes. I really appreciate the race/character arts a lot as well. The 2 encounters felt creative rather than "press x do damage" and while I will probably assume some kind of basic RPG elements may exist, encounters like these are really great. The overall layout and clicking text to advance is still something I love despite complaining about how it makes movement slower.
Just keep doing what you're doing, it's high quality.
Thank you! There will be hotkeys to navigate around in the next update. I will put the bug on the list
A nice start to be sure :3 I'm excited to see how this continues on! If you want help proofreading stuff, I'd be down to help sometimes, though I guess that'd spoil some things... Seems rude to keep a list of typos and then to just dump them all on you as reports though
That isn't rude at all, quite the opposite, it is really helpful! There is lots of text and I haven't had time to proofread most of it to a quality that I am happy with. Feel free to drop any typos you find in the comments. Posting the original sentence is enough for me to figure out what to correct
alright, maybe I'll do another playthrough on my computer this weekend for copy pasta ease
Here's the first batch. I really do like your writing style and humor :) I put [] around my proposed word/punctuation changes (except in the sentence that included [Trash-no-sweep], there I used <>), hopefully that's helpful, lmk if it isn't
I mean, the last time you caused any kind [of] serious accident was a decade ago
They [are] curious oddities, relics of a past that can never be returned to.
A girl, stark naked, hangs suspended between the fuse box'[s] wiring
(I am also just confused by what this means, I don't understand how big a Drainfly is. From this sentence, it sounds like she's *in* the fusebox, among the wires, but everything else makes it sound like Drainflies are the size of smallish humans... but some how still live in walls? I guess there is a wide range of sizes among humans, so how small is small? Like, there *are* 3 ft tall adult people, who might be able to squeeze in wall spaces, but not in a fuse box)
You feel the heat in your [veins] spike
Classes represent a person[']s skill in a field of arcane or martial study.
[Starter], Journeyman, Advanced, and[,] in rare cases[,] others.
When you hang with friends, [they] are your friends from work.
who[,] after following your [insistent] gaze[,] has started sticking out her chest,
and know all 'inspect' has t[au]ght you
You [throw] yourself at the Drainfly in an attempt to grab her.
Her dexterous [limbs] probe your body,
Against the wall of your utility closet lies [Trash-no-sweep] the barely <functioning> broom
the bolts holding the [brush] in place instantly come apart
being snapped in half, [accompanied] by a barrage of vindictive chittering.
You can see a thin trail of feminine excitement start to drizzle from between her [plump] legs.
Before you know it, your hands wander up her elegant legs, coming to rest on the sides her [plump] waist.
greedily grasping herself[ ]two handfuls of your chest. (delete the 'a' there)
The air grows even thicker with musk, your bodies [grow] hotter,
but still a far cry [from] the extravagant mix of life you would find at the market square.
However, business is nothing if not [stubborn] and stuck in its ways
In basic [terms], it was found that by super-sizing the chips
a sin so great that reality itself cannot [bear] the sight of it.
Elven males [started] largely forgoing relationships with their female counterparts
Instead, [Elven] males now spend their days
their inability to get [laid] on a secret conspiracy
[Born] from the fruits of the great [tree]. (?)
[if only] for the fact she is barely wearing anything else. (you have "weren't it" which I'm guessing was supposed to be "if it weren't", but I think "if only" fits slightly better?)
causing the city blocks to [grow]
are fights between guilds for territory, often over a [district]
However, most districts have far [too few] monsters
This makes Whitehat guilds[ ]highly [dependent] on the size of their territory, or the presence of Grayhat and [Blackhat] guilds
Their dungeons [are] well loved targets of Whitehat
Dungeons are labyrinthine constructions [built] around a dungeon core, often [run] by a Blackhat guild[ and] used
Thank you for the hard work! This way of reporting works perfectly for me. The fixes will be in the update tomorrow
Ok! Here's the rest that I caught in the prologue and Codex so far! Also, I assure you I didn't notice all of these in my original playthrough, this time I was reading very slowly for typos/grammar. I think I saved and tried all the branches for everything so hopefully caught aaaalllll the things. Sorry it's right before an update
capital is the only thing [worshipped] (apparently 1 p is also considered correct in American English, but it's less common than two p's)
[There] isn't much you have to hide, you are late,
'I see showing up for work [on time] is considered optional now, (there were two "now"s in the sentence, could be "I see showing up for work now is considered optional," or I suppose even "I see showing up for work is now considered optional" or if you wanted to maximize the nows to cover all the possible places it could be in the sentence "Now I now see showing up for work now is now considered optional now" XD lol)
After sniffing his nose, the sunken eyes ("sniffing his nose" is a bit weird, right? maybe "After giving a sniff"?)
[It's] a faxcee, an 'almost' computer,
It is like a laptop, if you squint [reeeeally] hard, (this shows up both in the in-story intro to faxcees and in the Codex entry)
There is way [too] many of them, they are arrogant,
tells you to 'show her the ropes', and sets out to [find] somebody to take this burden [off] of his hands. (this is also a bit weird, why is he setting out to find some one, he just dumped her on you, yeah? So maybe: "...tells you to 'show her the ropes', happy to find somebody...")
Nooks puts hard work in making sure people to think he is incompetent (I think should be "Nooks puts hard work into making sure people think he is incompetent" or maybe "Nooks puts hard work in making people to think he is incompetent")
nobody ever wondered what she [was] doing here
Within days, your fellow [colleagues] started greeting
Before you know it, she has pulled a first aid kit [from] somewhere,
one of [these] days you are going to end up dead
'Now [will you] take [off] your shirt[? Those] cuts need to be cleaned and bound.' (or else rework the next line to omit the reference to a rhetorical question, but I think I like Mona seeming like she's asking)
'Sure, I will take [off] my shirt.'
Mona['s] cute cheeks turn maroon,
Reaching for the [fifth]-
For a couple of [exciting] moments
her hot breath prickles your neck, and then [it's] over.
dependent on personal preference [than] gender roles.
Sex and romance are considered completely [unrelated] topics in Weredog society (? I'm not familiar with a definition of "untreated" that makes sense in that place, but it seems like the kind of word that might have a less common definition/usage that I don't know)
a monthly increase in sex drive brought on [by] pheromones
during the heat/[rut,] their instincts become so intensified
from getting fired more [than] once.
conduct your business [than] the middle of [the] cubicle block.
I have been standing here for [quite a few] minutes, (or "a couple of", you wound up with a mix of the two phrases XD)
[']She is right Nooks, we have been fooling around for far too long. Mekill will lynch us if he finds us dillydallying like this. It is time I get to work, and both of you too.['] (not formatted as speech, even though I believe it is meant to be the PC speaking)
waving you a warm goodbye, [despite], or perhaps due to her seat being
You can hear his fluffy tail slam against the back of your chair, as it wags excitedly from left to right. (how is his tail hitting the chair when he's up against the PC's back? I assumed I was sitting back in the chair with the front of his pelvis up against my [and thus the chair's] back, especially with Mona's comment about "a horny dog humping an office chair", so maybe his tail would be hitting the PC's desk or cubicle wall?)
Ask [Mona] for her opinion about the guilds.
somewhat fondly on the guild[ ]for bringing a feeling of resistance to a ever corporatizing world[ ]and (lol, usually I think you need more commas, I'm a comma fiend, but I hold back when it's all clear enough. I think this is the first case in your writing where I think they're confusing/uneeded)
the hair on the back of your neck [stands] up, (or "the hairs... stand")
A thing seems to click and clack [behind] you,
You can almost sense the horrid mass[ ]slither and pulse (omit the "it" or change to "as it slithers and pulses")
Mona [whispers], as she takes your hands.
(Mona, why are you telling me I'm not special??? ;-; I'm very cool. I'm going to become a Journeyman in a combat class someday, just you wait! Lol)
Join me, my Noodle, let us [elope] to (or "flee to", since elope tends to have a marriage connotation, but I feel like that also fits with Nooks' joke suggestion, interlope means like, intrude. I named my character Noodle for some reason, ignore that...)
Nooks['] tail starts to wag as [he] [repositions] himself
and inside a blackhat guild there is more to do [than] hunting monsters
spies to be caught, and [egos] to be stroked.
I think [it's] fairies again, and I really need a extra pair of hands.' He asks, giving quite a different reply [than] you were expecting.
that [none] who lived only before the Replication would have likened to a printer.
[It's] worse [than] normal this month,
But I like to be a rampaging sex demon on my own [terms],
And besides,[ I] have work to do, and forms fill,
Lets give them one hell [of] a whooping this time,
Then, you throw [off] your suit, and go completely nude.
From the printer's [bowels] erupts a roaring hiss, follow by a [bolt] of lighting.
[Nooks] grunts, as a squirt of sticky precum pulses from the tip.
More [than] happy to oblige,
'You don't do this often, [do] you, cutie?' (or "'You [do] this often, don't you, cutie?')
With his dick firmly [plugging] up your hole
but his [excited] puppy eyes melt your heart into submission
Suddenly, your peaceful break is interrupted by a [loud] voice.
Feeling [too] important to do your jobs, ey?
perhaps due to the fact they ran into none of[ your] ugly mugs
so it might be in our best interest to all show up with a massive hangover.' Nooks [suggests]
After you sit down[ ]next to her (or "After you [take a] seat next to her")
brought into existence by the dragons, to [serve] their every whim.
more successful species [than] their own creators, and became far more numerous [than] there were dragons in need of service.
common sight in most of the world, even where [there] are no dragons
a small number of kobolds [are] born (pretty sure... all this editing is making all words and grammar look fake @___@, but I'm so close to caught up!)
and an endless array of incompatible nuts and [bolts],
Then she stands up, and makes [a] bow so deep
making her big tail slam excitedly into a nearby [shelf],
her large fluffy abdomen makes you [instinctively] want to hug it.
from the silkmoth, the Bombix [mori]. (feels pendantic, but I taught biology for a bit and for my students' sakes can't not mention it, lol, in Latin/taxonomic names, the genus gets capitalized, but the species does not)
but their wing muscles are [too] weak to for upward flight.
Common size, four arms, sizable white or gray wings, (... the picture of Dayji only has two arms, right?)
into a force able to go [head to head] with Greater Amsterdam's ruling powers. (I think it's "head to head" or "toe to toe", right?)
Fishladle appears to be walking a [bit] stiffly,
I will have that [stiffness] out of your shoulders
Fishladle [continues] to sit still, her whole body seeming to grow shamefully warm.
You feel her [bowels] contract once more,
You drink cheap [wine] and cheaper spirits. Fishladle keeps dutifully [topping] off
(XD I fucking love [Trash-no-sweep])
Species:
Humans, [Elves], Orcs, (I know both are right, but usually I think most works pick one and stick with it and you use Elves rather than Elfs most of the time, so if you wanted to be internally consistent then the Codex directory should be edited)
Before you stands a display, containing a replica of the Hougeton, the [grimoire]
(lol, currently with the end of the prologue dumping you out on the street after claiming the Hougeton, but not progressing anything in Dayji's, you can go back in and sit down to feast again and wind up with multiple Hougetons)
So many typos, so much shame. Gracias, oh delightful human, I have made the corrections. I was aware of the grimoire thing, you have to be able to restart the scene once I make the update in order to make the next step in the event trigger. Just consider the multiple Hougetons a badge of honour
Wow i really like this game so far! Honestly can't wait to see the way it goes if everything goes as planned!
Only problem i actually found are a good bit of typos so far beside that it seems good so far! Can't wait to check out the next update keep up the good work!!
Definitely seems like a fun game, can't wait for it to get fleshed out a little!
There's also a small spelling mistake at the beginning: "Considering you where woken up by your alarm clock, it must be around 6 in the morning."
Happy to hear you enjoyed it! I have put the typo on the list for the next update
What should I do if I want to play this not in browser
For now, the game is web only
If you have the itch desktop app you can download web games and play them in their own window as if they were an .exe game.
Oh, awesome! I didn't know that
The game won't load for me, I get the Rogshard title card, but no start buttons or anything else. I also couldn't spot a load indicator, so the game seems to be stuck for me. I'm using the latest Firefox build
try clicking it
I've probably clicked every pixel of that graphic separately
How unfortunate, can you try opening the browser dev tools (ctrl+shift+i) and go to the console to see what messages are in there?
That's the console output
Right, it seems to be because it's attempting to access the browser storage, and isn't allowed to by the browser. (There appears to be some max size limit imposed by your installation of Firefox, perhaps due to incognito mode) There is some code in the game that should protect against this, but it appears it isn't working in a 100% of the cases. Thank you for reporting! I will put it on the list with things that need to be fixed (for now, using another browser or going out of incognito mode should work)
its good but you might wanna chnage the text colors so its easier to read
Glad you liked it! Is the red link text hard to read for you, or the black regular text?
For me the color black is like the same color as then background so might be just my problem idk
How weird, the background is supposed to look like paper. Can you share a screenshot?
If it may be just for me ill fix it on my side and thank you for ya time on talking to me about this
No worries, there is a chance that you're not the only one this happens too, just the only one bothering to report this. That text does seem awfully transparent, it really isn't supposed to look like that. I will do some testing around seeing if I can find something. Does it look like that on other browsers for you too?
Incredibly charming! Rare case of erotica that actually has a fun game behind it. The writing is tidy, and is very reminiscent of webcomics I read growing up, especially that broom. Can't wait to see where this game goes, I love it so far, and the art's also great.
Noooo, it ends so fast !
Well that's to be expected, but that introduction made me quite into it and eager for more. (love the broom as both a silly thing that can serve as running gag and apparently fate's tool too. Don't know why but it gave me some Discworld feel).
I don't really feel like exploring how much content there is in the world outside of the story for now, but will follow for sure the updates this is getting.
Also, for the only thing I can report for now : the loading was imperfect if done during the printer fight. Not sure why but some actions that would make the fight advance would not get undone by loading one turn back unlike the loss of my health, and unlike any loading during the first battle that went really fine (unless I haven't noticed). I'm not sure what is different nor if it is reproducible or just a one-time occurence.
Thanks for reporting, I will take a look
Oh, I think I had that happen too. I saved at the beginning of the fight, and then did [insight], and then I loaded it to see what happened if I did the other things before [insight], but it proceeded as if I had already done [insight] (with the info you get from it in the battle header text that precedes the decisions each time), I'm not sure if it was a load error, or if doing the other things kind of make it assume [insight] was already done?
btw there are some attribut-based choices in the game that require higher attributes than the mc has by default. i assume you can't increase your attributes yet? at least i didn't find a way before hitting the end of the current build
Yes, in the prologue it is impossible to succeed them. They are there to teach the player what the stats are for. The game will open up after this, and the skill checks will actually matter
why isn’t there a more like this button on this game
Looks promising so far. Looking forward to the next update. Didn't encounter any bugs but there are typos here and there.
I am glad you liked it! Feel free to drop any typos in comments if you come across them. Or you can wait for further updates, I will catch them the next time I read through the segments
line 3: "then she looks"
Do you really mean "arc-wizard" or did you want to say "arch-wizard"?
The last sentence has one "rather" too much. Those are the typos that i can recall at the top of my head. there have been a few more but don't remember where exactly they were.
Drat, the though one always sneaks in. A file search revealed about 20 more of them. My shame is all-consuming :P
Any chance for a Download verson?
One day, perhaps. But for the time being it is web only
Alrighty, thanks for the quick reply : )
I encountered a bug where if i was defeated by drainfly on the first day and then went to work the second die and tried to fix the printer i am attacked by a drain fly and am teleported back home, even though i was at work.
How odd, give me 30 minutes, I will upload a fix
Found the bug, there was a mistake in the enemy move-list selector. The fix is pushed. Thank you for reporting!
There is a broken hyperlink for dungeon when talking to nook in his office. Also holy moly nook is a heck of a soft dom.
Thank you, I have put it on the list for the next hotfix