You might be correct that it is still impossible in the current build. Skills and Equipment need a rebalance. In the next version v0.15.0 there will be a quest with Mox that results in you getting Mosqir drool cravings low, which allows you to bypass the check
Except for drainfly eggs, you can't in the public build currently. A couple of Pregnancies have made it into the Patreon build, they will make it to public in the coming weeks. Here is a reference.
Glad you liked it, thanks for playing! For the foreseeable future, early access to the updates is limited to Patreon. But don't worry, updates will always make it to the public itch build within two months of their initial development
Talk to Fishladle in the dungeon core and ask choose 'Dayji send me to learn something', after that conversation 'dungeon portal' is available in the skills section of your notebook
Excellent game! I can't wait for more updates! My only complaint is that (although the game makes an effort to be trans inclusive) there is gendering when it comes to sex organs. The symbols used to classify them are male and female, and when my (trans male) character (with a vagina) orgasms, it's referred to as "fem-fluids."
I recommend changing the language to be gender neutral for the player. (Maybe, if you include symbols to determine sex next to the saves, change them to "P" or "V"? Also, it would be fun to have a both option!) I only play the public build, so I don't know if my complaint would still be applicable.
Still, I love all of the effort you put into this game! 5 stars!
The fem-fluids stuff is an error, it should not be there. I looked in the latest Patreon build and still found two mentions, I have removed them, the removals will make it into public in a month or so.
I will look into the symbols on the saves and change them to something more representable.
On making a character with both genitalia: In the next version (released in a couple of hours) the player species 'Greater slime' will be added. It allows you to swap privates with a skill during gameplay (and fully change into both privates late game)
Both skirts do, so that they go over the underwear (things that do count as pants). Its a quirk of how the system works. --EDIT-- ah, you said shirt, in the current build it says skirt everywhere as far as I can tell, which is correct, it is a skirt
I play this on a phone and for some reason it takes a long time to load, the game loading is just halfed and its annoying, although it a really good game I hate it to wait five minutes or more so I can finally play again (my English might be bad so I'm sorry😅
I seemed to have ran in to a bug with one of the gift's Fishladel gives. It says she gave me Holiday skirt, but when I went to look at it in my inventory it says [xmas_shirt is undefined].
This text is frankly illegible and makes it very akward and annoying to play. It looks like this text has no defined color, which means my browser uses the system default. Also, when launched through Itch, I can't get past the first image. I can click the image, but the rest of the ui doesn't unfold at all, like it should.
Interesting, that weird text glitch again. What browsers / platform are you using? I will add a default text colour next update. (Using any other browser in the meantime should resolve the problem, which can be used as a workaround. Every major browser renders fine on my machine, making a fix hard to test)
On the app not starting: can you open the dev tools (Ctrl-shift-I on most browsers) and find out what errors are in the console?
Firefox, Windows 8.1, high contrast theme with custom colors to give the 8.1 ui I dark theme. Sometimes firefox uses this (even when I tell it not to), which can cause issues with pages with any kind of undefined color anywhere on the page.
Here is what it looks like when I open it with edge:
How do I open the dev tools when launched through itch?
extremely well made , don't abandon please and keep working on you game. also i kinda liked the story outside of the eroticism. its decent progression and all. do you know any non erotic games like yours? like what where your inspirations?
Thanks for playing, glad you liked it! For non-erotic inspiration, there is some really old stuff, wizardry and the 2d fallouts. But I mainly tried to capture the feel of modern lit-rpg webnovels, and covert the feel they have into an actual game
I extracted the zip file once it was downloaded...there's seemingly no apk??? I have no idea what to do. I don't exactly understand complex file fuckery, is there something I'm not getting?
It isn't a standalone app, the game is currently only available as a on-disk webpage. Opening index.html is how you run the game, but that requires you to extract the files with folders in tact, which isn't supported out of the box on android. I am looking into an apk version, but even if that works out, it will not be finished any time soon. I recommend just sticking with the itch.io web version if you can't get it to work
Go talk to Nooks and open the raid menu. Go send a graveyard raid (takes 10 guilders). Go do something else in-game while you wait for it to complete (doesn't take that long). Go start a guild meeting in the throne room to collect the rewards. Return to Nooks to turn in the quest
amazing game...but please think about a better solution in place of the notebook because this is extremely poorly made compared to everything else (you may want to put it on the left as an option or something like that)
sure it is something that is around more or less all the time so having it pop up in text every time seems kind of pointless
getting into your inventory/managing it feels slightly off because there is currently only this string of options all bundled together (with the slight nickpicking of a " , " at the end that should not be there there is enough space on the left/right so putting the inventory there would most likely fell better (even more if divided into equitable stuff, story stuff and ofc useable items)
other smaller things; would it be possible to make the player symbol on the map a different color? Normaly it is in the middle but in some places it is sadly not
Undershirt on model without breast looks like it has a slight amount of breast
You can befriend certain characters over the story, and strengthen your bonds with them through quests and interactions. But there are currently no traditional relationships you can peruse
Ah, that is a shame. Scrolling is automatically disabled on mobile. You can play there if you really don't like it. I will make a toggle to turn it off in the settings next version (Edit: the toggle has been added)
Have you equipped the [Ring of Undeath]? It lowers your Life resistance by 100%, reducing it from 100% heal, to 100% resist, stopping all healing effects except for sleeping
I am afraid that after the prologue, only the (male and female) slime fights exist, for now. New content is added every week, but there is a lot still to be developed
She should be in the Graveyard after building the Slime nest. She is on one of the bug tiles, if you see no bug tiles you have already run into her and it might take a while to respawn. You can try sleeping to advance the time somewhat
So, are you supposed to bottom out at 0 max flux after being swapped to being guildmaster as of 0.4.0? Makes it difficult to complete Fishladle's quest, even if there's not a huge point in doing so yet.
You are maxed out at 0 flux? How odd, your max should be 10. Have you tried sleeping in the bed? If that does not work, can you post a screenshot of the flux inside the 'Stats' menu of your notebook. (Auto flux regen when walking will make it in next update, shops that sell flux regen potions will come at a later date)
Strange, I will investigate. It appears you have gotten your stats deducted twice, was the last time you played this save v0.1.0? For now you can fix your flux by opening the debug console on the map (shift-D) and type 'set max_flux 13' to have to correct value. Base stats should be (max_hp 12, max_flux 10, strength 8, libido 8, skill 8, defense 8, wisdom 8)
I just noticed another thing. When talking with Fishladle it should be "Dayji senT me here". It looks like this mistake is made in multiple sentences. In the quest log in the quest "A new beginning; The sleeping servant" the sentence "An old servant OF Rogschard [...]" lacks the word "of".
It is a debug option for testing. If you really wish to turn that on, you can press (shift-D) while on the map and type 'has_penis true' or 'has_vagina true' respectively
This looks to be a very interesting game, with a well-thought -out story and world, but i've reached the point i have to find mona, send out the slimes, and recruit what i can only assume is a vampire, and none of them seem to be working? I've visited every tile in the graveyard and town and have yet to trigger any sort of event or have any dialogue other than having some time for my notebook. Is that part of the game simply not out?
Overall, though, this seems like a very good game and ill try to follow its progress.
Thanks for playing, glad you liked it! Yes, I am afraid that you have reached the end of the content that is currently out. You can check the Quest log to see which quests are still under construction
I think "Why there suddenly is a portal in my bedroom?" should be "Why is there suddenly a portal in my bedroom?". And somehow a single "you" escaped from the sentence "we will watch you while work". Also, "your face adorned with a filthy gRin" (the r is not there, and it should be). When you get the quest [Going full nude, or not], it says "Got quest [Going full nude, oF not]".
Ah, I think I see the problem, I deleted the text to go down on the stairs accidentally. You can still use the Q (go down) hotkey to descent the stairs, I will upload a fix in 30 minutes
For christ sakes trash no sweep, why do you have to haunt my life.
Probably my fave part of this story so far is that item, reminds my of my own sweeping brush. It's useless and the head keeps falling off of it, or it just seems to always be in the way somehow.
I really like this sort of humor, it's great to see it and you should definitely add more of that here and there. Good writing so far, and I hope that you are able to make this into a wonderful game.
I also really like the ability to click on words to learn what they mean, and the lore behind them. Then even in the lore pages, you can click to see more lore or history. This is great and something that can be constantly expanded.
I like how easy and simple it is to start, play, save, and load the game.
I very rarely comment on these sections but I think this game/story has a lot of potential. The world itself seems super interesting and unique to me, crossing our reality into complete fantasy and mashing it together. Gives the vibe of the tv show 'carnival row' sort of, but more current time.
As for suggestions - editing is needed since there are various spelling or grammar errors. This is not really a bad thing since it's clearly early development right now.
I would say it's a bit too early to ask for much else in terms of feedback, good luck with future writing.
I have really enjoyed what I read so far~ excited to see where this will go! I am quite surprised on how detailed this world is and how much lore there is already. Great work on the intro as it really hooked me!
In the encounter with Nooks there's an option with an Exhibitionist perk, does that actually exist? And if so how is it obtained? Also I really like the game! I've played it for about two hours now and I'm looking around for secrets, if there are any.
Depends on what you are asking about. I expect the levelling system to be fully completed within a month or so, but making the actual skills and the encounters that use them will be an ongoing process
Mostly good though starting with what I find bad (though minor) first: When selecting a red highlight to continue, if the new text is longer than your browser window I have to scroll up to read the top part. It can also be annoying to navigate areas, (unless I'm missing keybinds) due to how "go east" etc is laid out.
(Bug/Spoilers) There's also a bug where when you accept the Kobold egg the scene restarts.
All that aside, this is still the best (though currently short) story based smut game I seen since CoC. Dialogue is amazing, fun and witty. More than just lewds. Readability is perfectly easy on my eyes. I really appreciate the race/character arts a lot as well. The 2 encounters felt creative rather than "press x do damage" and while I will probably assume some kind of basic RPG elements may exist, encounters like these are really great. The overall layout and clicking text to advance is still something I love despite complaining about how it makes movement slower.
Just keep doing what you're doing, it's high quality.
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How does one get the 14 libido required for the Falzly scene? i got it up to 13, but cant see a way to get it any higher
You might be correct that it is still impossible in the current build. Skills and Equipment need a rebalance. In the next version v0.15.0 there will be a quest with Mox that results in you getting Mosqir drool cravings low, which allows you to bypass the check
can i get pregnant as a male slime
how do i get pregnant as a female human.
Except for drainfly eggs, you can't in the public build currently. A couple of Pregnancies have made it into the Patreon build, they will make it to public in the coming weeks. Here is a reference.
I had no issue getting past it, though I for some reason had to pick human twice.
Love the concept but I don't like going through Patreon. Is there going to be any way to buy this through itch.io?
Glad you liked it, thanks for playing! For the foreseeable future, early access to the updates is limited to Patreon. But don't worry, updates will always make it to the public itch build within two months of their initial development
how do i finish the kobold knowledge quest because i cant get the portal ability
Talk to Fishladle in the dungeon core and ask choose 'Dayji send me to learn something', after that conversation 'dungeon portal' is available in the skills section of your notebook
Excellent game! I can't wait for more updates! My only complaint is that (although the game makes an effort to be trans inclusive) there is gendering when it comes to sex organs. The symbols used to classify them are male and female, and when my (trans male) character (with a vagina) orgasms, it's referred to as "fem-fluids."
I recommend changing the language to be gender neutral for the player. (Maybe, if you include symbols to determine sex next to the saves, change them to "P" or "V"? Also, it would be fun to have a both option!) I only play the public build, so I don't know if my complaint would still be applicable.
Still, I love all of the effort you put into this game! 5 stars!
Thanks for playing, glad you liked it!
Cool game so far, curious to see where it goes.
How do I open the game? Unless I'm just being stupid, I can't find a file to open in the folder.
Open index.html in your browser. When downloaded, it still needs a browser to run, but no longer requires an internet connection
thanks a lot
I noticed that one of the new shirts, the maroon checkered shirt, equips to the leg slot for some reason.
Both skirts do, so that they go over the underwear (things that do count as pants). Its a quirk of how the system works. --EDIT-- ah, you said shirt, in the current build it says skirt everywhere as far as I can tell, which is correct, it is a skirt
Hopefully this helps: wiki
I play this on a phone and for some reason it takes a long time to load, the game loading is just halfed and its annoying, although it a really good game I hate it to wait five minutes or more so I can finally play again (my English might be bad so I'm sorry😅
That is strange. Loading the web page should only be 5mb or so. What operating system / browser are you running?
I'm on a phone and I wish I owned a computer :( also nvm I found my problem, I think I had to press on it or something like that and it works normally
Ok it works again, it's just my internet was bad (also my favorite even is the big mushroom UwU)
I seemed to have ran in to a bug with one of the gift's Fishladel gives. It says she gave me Holiday skirt, but when I went to look at it in my inventory it says [xmas_shirt is undefined].
I hope this is helpful.
Noted, I will look into it today, thanks for reporting!
I uploaded a fix, you should have a [Holiday skirt] in your inventory now (I mistyped it as shirt)
cool
This text is frankly illegible and makes it very akward and annoying to play. It looks like this text has no defined color, which means my browser uses the system default. Also, when launched through Itch, I can't get past the first image. I can click the image, but the rest of the ui doesn't unfold at all, like it should.
Firefox, Windows 8.1, high contrast theme with custom colors to give the 8.1 ui I dark theme. Sometimes firefox uses this (even when I tell it not to), which can cause issues with pages with any kind of undefined color anywhere on the page.
Here is what it looks like when I open it with edge:
How do I open the dev tools when launched through itch?
The colors are fixed, Thanks!
The Itch version is still broken, and Ctrl-shift-I doesn't open the dev tools on itch like it does on firefox.
Strange that the dev console won't boot, is this on the itch app download version, or on a browser on the itch.io website?
I'm blown away by the world-building you've done here. You also write so well! I enjoyed playing this very much :)
Thank you, happy to hear you liked it!
What are the...ahem...kinks if any?
As of the current build:
With more to come in later updates
Say no more. I'm in.
extremely well made , don't abandon please and keep working on you game. also i kinda liked the story outside of the eroticism. its decent progression and all. do you know any non erotic games like yours? like what where your inspirations?
Thanks for playing, glad you liked it! For non-erotic inspiration, there is some really old stuff, wizardry and the 2d fallouts. But I mainly tried to capture the feel of modern lit-rpg webnovels, and covert the feel they have into an actual game
thanks. lovely game
I get a source code error when I try and play this unfortunately.
What device are you on and what is the error?
Thought it was a CoC spiritual succesor, but it managed to differentiate from CoC by a lot. Great start, hope you keep up the good work :)
Thanks for playing, glad you liked it!
I extracted the zip file once it was downloaded...there's seemingly no apk??? I have no idea what to do. I don't exactly understand complex file fuckery, is there something I'm not getting?
It isn't a standalone app, the game is currently only available as a on-disk webpage. Opening index.html is how you run the game, but that requires you to extract the files with folders in tact, which isn't supported out of the box on android. I am looking into an apk version, but even if that works out, it will not be finished any time soon. I recommend just sticking with the itch.io web version if you can't get it to work
Make it download able please..
I'm mobile user
Is there a downloadable version ? I would love to play this game but I can only play offline
The itch.io desktop app automatically downloads the files to your computer when installing a game, you can use this to play offline even for web games
How do I get this A new beginning; Monster raid
Go talk to Nooks and open the raid menu. Go send a graveyard raid (takes 10 guilders). Go do something else in-game while you wait for it to complete (doesn't take that long). Go start a guild meeting in the throne room to collect the rewards. Return to Nooks to turn in the quest
amazing game...but please think about a better solution in place of the notebook because this is extremely poorly made compared to everything else (you may want to put it on the left as an option or something like that)
other than that ..i am hooked, feed me more XD
Thanks for playing, glad you liked it! Interesting feedback, can you describe what parts of the notebook you did not like?
sure
it is something that is around more or less all the time so having it pop up in text every time seems kind of pointless
getting into your inventory/managing it feels slightly off because there is currently only this string of options all bundled together (with the slight nickpicking of a " , " at the end that should not be there
there is enough space on the left/right so putting the inventory there would most likely fell better (even more if divided into equitable stuff, story stuff and ofc useable items)
other smaller things; would it be possible to make the player symbol on the map a different color? Normaly it is in the middle but in some places it is sadly not
Undershirt on model without breast looks like it has a slight amount of breast
Ok, noted. Thank you for your feedback!
I have the quests for the slime dungeon but can't find it anywhere, help?
For building the slime nest? Keep going east from the Throne room until you see a Fluid tile
don't know if this is a sily question but, is there romance in this game? or some sort of deep relationships we can enter in with other characters?
You can befriend certain characters over the story, and strengthen your bonds with them through quests and interactions. But there are currently no traditional relationships you can peruse
The scrolling thing is... irritating.
Ah, that is a shame. Scrolling is automatically disabled on mobile. You can play there if you really don't like it. I will make a toggle to turn it off in the settings next version (Edit: the toggle has been added)
It's not for me but I don't mind lol
The healing doesn't work
Have you equipped the [Ring of Undeath]? It lowers your Life resistance by 100%, reducing it from 100% heal, to 100% resist, stopping all healing effects except for sleeping
thank you that was the issue
Hey, is there any other monsters besides the lanterfly and male slime? I can't find anymore after that
I am afraid that after the prologue, only the (male and female) slime fights exist, for now. New content is added every week, but there is a lot still to be developed
where is the female slime? I can't find her lol
She should be in the Graveyard after building the Slime nest. She is on one of the bug tiles, if you see no bug tiles you have already run into her and it might take a while to respawn. You can try sleeping to advance the time somewhat
I can only find one bug tile and it's the male one
Edit: nvm, found her
Which version of Undum are you using, out of curiosity? Just the main branch, or a fork?
The main branch, but heavily modified. If you want to know how things are done, feel free to open your browser's dev tools and poke around in the code
So, are you supposed to bottom out at 0 max flux after being swapped to being guildmaster as of 0.4.0? Makes it difficult to complete Fishladle's quest, even if there's not a huge point in doing so yet.
You are maxed out at 0 flux? How odd, your max should be 10. Have you tried sleeping in the bed? If that does not work, can you post a screenshot of the flux inside the 'Stats' menu of your notebook. (Auto flux regen when walking will make it in next update, shops that sell flux regen potions will come at a later date)
Technically I max out at 3 thanks to trying to boost it, but otherwise yeah.
Strange, I will investigate. It appears you have gotten your stats deducted twice, was the last time you played this save v0.1.0? For now you can fix your flux by opening the debug console on the map (shift-D) and type 'set max_flux 13' to have to correct value. Base stats should be (max_hp 12, max_flux 10, strength 8, libido 8, skill 8, defense 8, wisdom 8)
That may have been it, or otherwise similar. Thanks for the quick follow-up.
I just noticed another thing. When talking with Fishladle it should be "Dayji senT me here". It looks like this mistake is made in multiple sentences. In the quest log in the quest "A new beginning; The sleeping servant" the sentence "An old servant OF Rogschard [...]" lacks the word "of".
Thank you for reporting! I will make sure they are fixed in the next update
I saw that in the images you can be a hermaphrodite but I can’t select that option in the game? Is that a later addition?
It is a debug option for testing. If you really wish to turn that on, you can press (shift-D) while on the map and type 'has_penis true' or 'has_vagina true' respectively
Thanks!
This looks to be a very interesting game, with a well-thought -out story and world, but i've reached the point i have to find mona, send out the slimes, and recruit what i can only assume is a vampire, and none of them seem to be working? I've visited every tile in the graveyard and town and have yet to trigger any sort of event or have any dialogue other than having some time for my notebook. Is that part of the game simply not out?
Overall, though, this seems like a very good game and ill try to follow its progress.
Thanks for playing, glad you liked it! Yes, I am afraid that you have reached the end of the content that is currently out. You can check the Quest log to see which quests are still under construction
Ah, I see it now. Thank you so much. It's a great game
I think "Why there suddenly is a portal in my bedroom?" should be "Why is there suddenly a portal in my bedroom?". And somehow a single "you" escaped from the sentence "we will watch you while work". Also, "your face adorned with a filthy gRin" (the r is not there, and it should be). When you get the quest [Going full nude, or not], it says "Got quest [Going full nude, oF not]".
Thanks for reporting! I will make sure they are corrected in the next update
When you first go into Dayji's shop and Mona and Nooks are sitting at the table it says "Nona and Nooks"
Thanks for reporting! I will make sure it is fixed in the next update
It is not letting me past this point when you try to leave the building after work
Strange, can you tell me a bit more about what is happening, perhaps share a screenshot where you are stuck?
Ah, I think I see the problem, I deleted the text to go down on the stairs accidentally. You can still use the Q (go down) hotkey to descent the stairs, I will upload a fix in 30 minutes
Thank you and I did post a screenshot but it didn't load by the looks of it. God don't you just love itch?
Fix is up, thanks for reporting!
For christ sakes trash no sweep, why do you have to haunt my life.
Probably my fave part of this story so far is that item, reminds my of my own sweeping brush. It's useless and the head keeps falling off of it, or it just seems to always be in the way somehow.
I really like this sort of humor, it's great to see it and you should definitely add more of that here and there. Good writing so far, and I hope that you are able to make this into a wonderful game.
I also really like the ability to click on words to learn what they mean, and the lore behind them. Then even in the lore pages, you can click to see more lore or history. This is great and something that can be constantly expanded.
I like how easy and simple it is to start, play, save, and load the game.
I very rarely comment on these sections but I think this game/story has a lot of potential. The world itself seems super interesting and unique to me, crossing our reality into complete fantasy and mashing it together. Gives the vibe of the tv show 'carnival row' sort of, but more current time.
As for suggestions - editing is needed since there are various spelling or grammar errors. This is not really a bad thing since it's clearly early development right now.
I would say it's a bit too early to ask for much else in terms of feedback, good luck with future writing.
I have really enjoyed what I read so far~ excited to see where this will go! I am quite surprised on how detailed this world is and how much lore there is already. Great work on the intro as it really hooked me!
In the encounter with Nooks there's an option with an Exhibitionist perk, does that actually exist? And if so how is it obtained? Also I really like the game! I've played it for about two hours now and I'm looking around for secrets, if there are any.
You can't alter the player character's perks and stats in the prologue, but you will be able to get it in the game later (once that part is made)
(I just realized I forgot to ask) But when might that part be made? If you have a general area of time.
Depends on what you are asking about. I expect the levelling system to be fully completed within a month or so, but making the actual skills and the encounters that use them will be an ongoing process
Mostly good though starting with what I find bad (though minor) first: When selecting a red highlight to continue, if the new text is longer than your browser window I have to scroll up to read the top part. It can also be annoying to navigate areas, (unless I'm missing keybinds) due to how "go east" etc is laid out.
(Bug/Spoilers) There's also a bug where when you accept the Kobold egg the scene restarts.
All that aside, this is still the best (though currently short) story based smut game I seen since CoC. Dialogue is amazing, fun and witty. More than just lewds. Readability is perfectly easy on my eyes. I really appreciate the race/character arts a lot as well. The 2 encounters felt creative rather than "press x do damage" and while I will probably assume some kind of basic RPG elements may exist, encounters like these are really great. The overall layout and clicking text to advance is still something I love despite complaining about how it makes movement slower.
Just keep doing what you're doing, it's high quality.
Thank you! There will be hotkeys to navigate around in the next update. I will put the bug on the list